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starryeyz 9/2/02 . chapter 25
love it! can't wait for the sequel!very creative, i think this is one of the most original ones i've read! it's on my faves list and i am going to recommend it to my friends. :-)
starryeyz 9/2/02 . chapter 11
ooo, a love potion! i love love potions, they always make a story so intereting! this is so great, i wonder if ryoko will fall for tom...
starryeyz 9/2/02 . chapter 7
wow, tom sure is charming! ;-) its kinda gross though 'cause it's her boyfriend's dad. *shudder* but he's just so charming! ;-)
starryeyz 9/2/02 . chapter 5
so he IS the father! thats really creative, the whole permission slip thing. this is now on my favorite stories list.
starryeyz 9/2/02 . chapter 4
it's not her fault that he has no love life! that was cold.

hehe, "this doesn't look right!" lol. cute. i think i am hooked on this story!
starryeyz 9/2/02 . chapter 1
hi mandy, it's ariana and i am reading your story! (well duh!) i really like it so far! curious, i wonder if kouga really is voldemorts son... i'll read more now...
Suppi-chan2 3/11/02 . chapter 1
Yay! I finally read the first chapter!
Morphatoo lazy to sing in 3/9/02 . chapter 11
OMG why you write so goody good? I LOVE MORE MORE OO THERE IS MORE!

I GO READ ! YAY *runs off8
Ikena 3/7/02 . chapter 25
very coooool! nice lovely!

hurry up!

I want sequel! hehe

very cool story me likes!

sequel!sequel!sequel!sequel!sequel!sequel!sequel!sequel!sequel!sequel!sequel!sequel!sequel!sequel!sequel!sequel!sequel!sequel!sequel!sequel!sequel!

ups hehe _
Yashaness 3/4/02 . chapter 25
*still siting there*bord tone*though don't worry, I'm not really bord* When is Tom gonna be back...? We's want him back in job. When is The sequal comin' out? Give us a date. WHEN IS MAMORLE DAY WEEKEND EVER GONNA COME? Then me and you can get together and have some fun .. Ok I'm going back to my corner now. Here read this I copy for you:

darkside/demongurl/a3

I hope you don't mind I needed a reason for fininshing your story ;;;
Yashaness 3/4/02 . chapter 24
*makes whistle sound* now that's the first. a girl makes a move. kool. IS Tom ever gonna be back? :*(
Yashaness 3/4/02 . chapter 22
Hey! The noogie thing is mine!
Vegetas-Princess 3/3/02 . chapter 25
Lol, who needs sleep? GREAT ending Megami-chan! Methinks you did AWESOME! And know what? Juppers, that's right! I can't WAIT for the sequel! Now.. WRITE! *hides from Megami's bishies*

*Chante*
Nobody12 3/3/02 . chapter 23
Cliffie! Cliffie! No fair! No Fair.. ::sobs::
Nobody12 3/3/02 . chapter 22
Great chapter, as usual.. So she doesn't remember? Awwe... Well I'm off to read the next

Mandy
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