This is such a horrific, yet beautifully written peice of literature. It so perfectly portrays the horror of the Games, and the victors emotions...I love it.

Oh my. What an interesting poem. Some of it is choppy and cuts the imaginary flow in my mind but maybe that's just me...

Aww... this is so sad... who was the victoer? anyone i know? Keep on writing, i love all your stories!

Wow. I really love this. Dark, true, but it really reflects on how most of the victors must feel. Awesome job. :)

Ciao Bello

Nice, dark, angsty. I love stuff like that. Your poem was good! It was interesting the way you added more of a story bit to the end. I was a bit rusty but altogether quite nice. Well done.

Wow, that was dark, especially the ending! I really like your take on the Games though, and how killing can be just as much, if not more torturous than being killed. This was a nice idea, and pretty well written, too, for being "not much of a poet." Great job!