All right...this story has potential, but I felt the emotions were too rushed, and that the emotions lacked descriptions. I'm sorry...I would highly recommend a beta. I would like to beta it for you but I don't really have the time, so maybe you could find one?

Sorry...

Love it! Aw there's not going to be more?

Aw! So cute and sad and fluffy-ish!

Aw! I feel so bad for Henry...

Ooh! Another HenNat piece from you! YAYNESS! I like this one. I just really hopes that Henry does everything in his power to help Nat through this rather she likes it or not.

First off, AW! POOR HENRY! Don't leave her!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

i need more!

Ok, I feel really unoriginal now...I wrote a prego-Nat fic (more like a novel...32 pages...) back in September...it SUCKED. So, I'm trying to revise it (which practically means rewriting it) And now there's already two more of this genre up and they're SO much better than mine...

I feel incompetent, but...we'll see...

It's a RENT/N2N crossover. I'll post it soon...Cuz I need YOUR HELP, COLLABORATION BUDDY!

(And yes, according to LOSTrocker, the three of us are each other's muses...lol)

Loved the story though (sorry...I got off topic)

Update! Please?

Aw! So cute! And le gasp! You has discovered my true identity! Yeah... I ge to be your muse now. Henri is currently my hostage.