Great story.

i love this story! I love Dr. Cooper, he is funny and so sexy

ohmygosh. adorable. freaking. story. :)

i really like it! it's the first Nurse Jackie story ive read too, lol

i think you should do a sequel; just saying ;)

Hi, I can see a lot of potential in this story and I've been waiting and waiting for a Coop/OC plot for AGES.

Some constructive criticism for you though; you've got a great plot going on here, but I can't help but notice that you seem to be rushing the dialogue slightly. I think if you read it through you'll find a few grammatical errors that alter how the dialogue is supposed to sound (such as the use of ...)

The 'dot-dot-dot' is handy sometimes but you don't want to overuse it. Instead use a comma for a natural pause.

For such a great plot I also thought that there maybe could be a little more descriptive writing going on (although it's your story, of course, ignore me if you don't like it)

I'd just like to add that 1.) I really LOVE the story and

2.)In no way do I mean this to be a flame review, I only give constructive criticism

Beta readers are always handy if you want a little feedback and extra input. I'd be happy to help if you like :)

By the way . . . did I mention I LOVE the story? . . .

He said he had to stop himself at laughing in front of Jackie's face because of the look she gave him when he told her all about us.-a ha,in your face Jackie!

"You weren't interested in the movie at all"-lmao

This is great, which is good cus its the only coop/OC that i could find [ I hope you manage to update son and your arm gets better! and its no worriss that you changed it its better yhat you dont get intot trouble! hopw you update soon! x

This is kind of, but not really, like the situation my friend has with her boyfriend. If her parents knew they were dating she would be dead. Her brother almost found out! And if he did he would go straight to their mom. Hope everything works out.

Hi! You must be living in some kind of crap of something right now, right? Poor you...feeling bad for u. Writing a story...secret.

What do you mean stories like these?
Hope you get better soon

I’m sorry to hear you get better soon!

They’re just SO CUTE!I LOVE this story!

"I'm just checking my reflection"-lol,right

"You really need to see a doctor"-LMAO!

I like Zoey

It’s not her fault

if you're going to stay with me-oh!

Once again,get better soon!

Coop is cute when he’s stuttering

Update soon please!GREAT STUFF!

stopping myself from acting out in sexual actions as I started to be nervous-lol,that’d be so funny!

"I think you're pretty funny"-I agree

She punched my face-and she,a grown woman just let it?

I was looking for a story like this,thank you!