You know, Charlie buying coffee is a good way for him to demonstrate his value

I fucking died when they mentioned the DENNIS system

In the next chapter Can ya have the waitress get wet with a blue jean jacket like she did in Mac's Big Break please?

Can ya have the waitress get wet with a blue jean jacket like she did in Mac's Big Break please..?

Can ya have the waitress get wet with a blue jean jacket like she did in Mac's Big Break please?

Cool

Can ya have the waitress get wet with a blue jean jacket like she did in Mac's Big Break please?

Awsome.

Can ya have the waitress get wet with a blue jean jacket like she did in Mac's Big Break please?

I love, love, love the fact that you made Charlie unable to say 'ambiguous'. It made my day. And yes, I think the characters are in character.

Hey, did you ever continue this? I love this! I'm a total Charlie/Waitress shipper and I love their interactions here... and how Charlie just can't stop stalking her even when he tries LOL

I love this so far! You're really doing a good job of the characters. I could see Charlie and Dee and the Waitress all saying this on the show. Excellent job :)

It has the feel that it could be a real story arc for the show, even. It DID get better! If you ever see this, you should really consider trying to tack an ending onto this thing.

...and it's getting better! I wish this had been finished, ya know.

It's a little out-of-character, but who else but Charlie Day could write this stuff, am I right?

I wanna hurry up and send in this review so I can move on to the next chapter and see where you take this. Looking pretty good so far, aside from a few knit-picky things.

Okay problem. I loveeee sweet dee. and I love her even more with mac. sooooooo...what do I have to do to make this happen? does cash need to change hands? cause i'll do it.

Great chapter. I can't wait to read more. )