Wow. That story was simply amazing. I truly loved it beginning to end.

Now, if you'll excuse me, it's 2 in the morning and my parents believe me to be asleep. :)

Loved youy story again!

I went to check out older fics and this one's amazing! KUDOS TO YOU! You've become a favourite. XD

That was a very good fanfic. You got the characters perfectly and the story line was strong. I approved of the way situations were handled, and since I am very big on canon you should know that that's not an easy thing to achieve. I believe that that is how things would actually happen if the characters were put in those positions. Great job!

As a writer though I must say that you need work on punctuation and sentence forming. Also the writing format could have used work.

Example: This would have been a much more effective and dramatic way to write this scene. ...

But these are all technical things that don't really matter in a fanfic. Still I though maybe you'd appreciate the advice :)

Love your fic!

-Miyth

I love your work. I just wanted to say that I love the way you wrote this story. It keeps you in suspence how you tell parts of the story then add others later on. It's great. It really keeps the reader in suspence. well its keeping me in suspence. You keep a writing and I'll keep reading. Well done to you!

Ditto_in_aus ('_')

Oh wow, this fic is really good. You have my undying attention for any future fics now.

I just adore the whole concept of the *shudder* experiments. Giovanni is a bastard and I'm glad Jessie does him in at the end. I can't help but feel sympathy for James, him thinking that future sight was a gift. More like a curse!

I'm going to read the sequel now ... it better be better than this one, if ya get the drift?

Bye

Bexi

Hell yeah! Giovanni deserved that!

*sniffs and wipes her eyes and regains her postion* It takes a REALLY good stoy to make me break down and cry now. And so far only a few have done that. I would like to tell you that I bawled my eyes out like a 2 year old. You are VERY tallented at romance and drama. And thank goodness you didnt let Botch die *runs off and hugs her secret butch plushie then runs back* That was so sweet. Now pardon me whilst I read the sequal. _

this pokemon fanfic was really good it kept me hooked for (squints at her clock) three hours a very great story about team rocket great piece of work

Beautiful, Beautiful fic! I LOVE it! This is the most perfect and complete piece of Fanfiction I've read in a very long time! Definetly one of my all-time favorite fics, definetly worth reading several times(which I will do)! This fic is a model for all who are writing a Team Rocket fanfiction, and even for those writing an AAML (which I don't particularly like, but heck, sure they could take an example from this!). This is a fic to be proud of, and we all will be waiting anxiously for another fic from you!

*sniff* Good job! *sniff*

(believe it or not, I kinda cried on the last chapter _;;)

Totally Brilliant! That's such a good ending, this is my fave story ever! I've loved reading every chapter! I'm so pleased that you wrote it!

I hope you right more fic's soon, as i know they will be as good as this one!

A great ending Jessie killed Giovanni i'm glad he got what he deserved.I think you should write a sequal because I really enjoyed this story and I would like to see what happens next.

it's over? Waaah! i wanted to know what he saw in the last vision! ;_; anyway, great story!

Told ya I couldn't wait to read the next chapter! It's 7.25am and I've come on here before I have to go to work, and this chapter was well worth waiting for! I HAVE to know how it ends!

;_; waaa! usually i don't care when the characters the author invents dies, but poor Talia! Please write the conclusion soon, i can't handle so much suspense!