Almost better than the original Music Man :) I loved thinking the rats were writing when there was horrible spelling.

Who would have guessed the yellow submarine was orange? Meanie McGuires indeed!

Aaaaaaaaaaaaand...

You lost all humor in part one and fell down beneath the very thin line of crazily funny into horrifyinly stupid.

Good Day.

LMAO!

Only one suggestion- Don't call them Mark and Arnold.

And perhaps a more play script format would make sense hmmmm?

Um, this is funny and all, but... Have you been hacked or were you just high while writing this? Or maybe it's just some plot to destroy the world. I dunno. But seriously, what the heck?