|Reviews for The Music Man II|
| grifffen 10/14/12 . chapter 5
Almost better than the original Music Man :) I loved thinking the rats were writing when there was horrible spelling.
Who would have guessed the yellow submarine was orange? Meanie McGuires indeed!
| SlupinLove 10/2/10 . chapter 2
You lost all humor in part one and fell down beneath the very thin line of crazily funny into horrifyinly stupid.
| SlupinLove 10/2/10 . chapter 1
Only one suggestion- Don't call them Mark and Arnold.
And perhaps a more play script format would make sense hmmmm?
| AllApologies451994 3/17/10 . chapter 5
Um, this is funny and all, but... Have you been hacked or were you just high while writing this? Or maybe it's just some plot to destroy the world. I dunno. But seriously, what the heck?