I find it strange that Quinn didn't get his time back but Blake did... Mind implosion.

it was okay i guess jkjk it was good

i lvoe this story. and so did my FiVe year old babyy.

yay achme i mean Cris was okay and so was everyone else (i was kind of worried about those people) there okay XD

I feel so giddy yet depressed that I actually get to review one of the first fanfics for such an awesome book. What's even better is that it's such an amazing fic!

The Egypt ride had all these minor characters in it and I love how you delved into them a bit. When reading the book you almost sort of forget that they too were once riders and that they still had lives elsewhere. It's sweet how you gave "Achmed" his life back. Of course it is the most logical ending, seeing as reality corrects itself for such.

Okay, I'm rambling now. I do that when I'm psyched. Great story!

Loved this story, I can't believe how few stories there are on this book! Well, I guess that means I have some writing to do! The only thing I can recommend for this story is dividing it into chapters

This. Is. So. Effing. Good!

Seriously. I was also interested in what happened to Achmed, and your explanation was amazing. Please write more!

:)

I really liked this. It was an interesting way of giving the background story. One thing that I wanted to clear up in my own mind. Did they "disappear" in the order they came? or randomly? Wonderful writing!

Only one word is able to describe this story - AMAZING! LOVED IT! Your an awesome writer and I truley enjoyed this story! :D

I absolutely loved your story. It was amazing. I love how you gave depth and a backstory to Achmed. I'm a total sucker for development of minor characters. Reading your story makes me want to go dig up Full Tilt and read it again. Amazing story. Great job! :]