Great start - can't wait to read more!

that was a really nice o/s! i'd love to see what happens with these characters :)

i was worried when i started this. The devastation in Haiti is overwhelming and a truly sensitive subject. But what you wrote was so respectful and true. I love that you didn't make them fall in love instantly and then jump each other, but sought out to explore that connection you can share with someone in an instant, even if it is amongst tragedy.

Wonderful job...

That was really nice )

This story is amazing! I'm such an emotional person, I cry over everyhing, but all the emotion in just the first chapter, I'm speachless! I am excited to see what you have planned for Bella and Edward! I hope the other characters will be involved as well! Thank in advance for the next update! (Which will hopefully be very soon because I'm greedy like that!) Misty

beautiful story; favorited :)

i honestly feel that you showed the tradegy that goes on really well. I love how they both made an impact on eachothers lives. I look forward to reading the future chapters. :-)

Aww, so cute! I like that there weren't any overwhelming, instant love promises in this story. Just two people who changed each other in some minute way after meeting. Good story!

can you please! please.. make it a long history! it was so good to read it.. plz!3

you will be making my day!

love

yes so you just made me tear up at work. amazing o/s :)

Oh wow, i love it. it was sad how things brought them together and i hope they meet again..pls tell me you guys are going to continue this story...

That was a very good story... touching.

How touching!

love how one person can change some much in another person life.

defintely looking forward to another chapter... perhaps a future meeting of our two characters? :D

Marvellous n_n

Thats right,you can't just sit and watch the disaster's impact unfold in front of you (sigh)

Loved reading this as part of the Haiti Compilation. So beautifully written. Such a touching story.