This would have been an awesome DLC that I would have gladly pay for. Awesome job!

I have to tell you, I'm really enjoying your depiction of Shepard. I just got finished reading another fic that made her a crybaby and it left a sour taste in my mouth. In my mind, yes, Shepard is human but she's also a hero, they don't walk around imitation a water faucet. Great job!

Wow. I just... Yeah, no. Wow.

This is by far, the best Mass Effect fanfiction up here. You've done an incredible job at not only capturing the essence of the characters, but the tech and the feel of the universe.

I can't wait to read what else you've written, and I look forward to everything you write in the future!

Shepard and Kaidan are separating?

That's likely realistic...but, but but...they can't! :(

Thank you for your story. It was awesome! I liked your original plot too, i hope you write more and continue this storyline. I'm not normally a fem Shep but I really enjoyed your portrayal of the ME world. Please write more.

Well, at least they are breaking down the walls a bit. But I don't know that simply having sex is going to help them much sort out their problems.

You put a remarkable amount of detail into things that weren't in the game. Its a great touch.

I like your use and characterization of Thane. Of all of the ME2 characters, I liked him the best. I like that you carry his compassion through here as well.

So even Miranda is interested. LOL

I like how you switched from shep's POV to Miranda's. You don't see things from her eyes often.

gahhhh... way to put the emotions through the wringer. I almost felt bad for Kaidan when Shepard was describing what happened to her in detail. But of course the natural reaction to that is sex, right? Hot hot commander-on-commander sex. Holy crap. this chapter is perfect. And I love that grunt and jack were there. The "what your you doing?" line almost killed me

this is pretty much how Mass Effect 2 *should* be, dammit. This chapter touches on all the questions I have, and plays out perfectly. And I love how Joker is avoiding Kaidan. That last line is pure gold.

Uh oh. Now he's in trouble.

Nice detail in the story. :)

I read it from chapter 1 to chapter 15 in one sitting, so that says something by itself, furthermore I enjoyed every minute of it. Furthermore, you managed to craft an original tale that fit perfectly into the universe.

Excellent work.

I had wondered if Kaidan would have been sent "unofficially" at some point to check out Shepard's activities.

I'm looking forward to where this is going.

Your story was wonderful. I may have

to start it over and read the whole

thing at one time. I hope you write

more. Thanks.