so sad! immortal rain is so dang depressing, but beautiful. lovely job.

cries a bit That was so poignant, and well written. It seemed like that scene would have fit naturally in the manga. Very good!

Wow. That was very beautiful. I was hooked on every word

Very well done. Really.

I haven't read Immortal Rain in forever, so it took me a moment to remember where the setting was for a minute there, heh-heh... For some odd reason, I pictured Yuca's voice like Akito's from Fruits Basket, even though Yuca is a kid here. *fail* In any case, I do wish this was longer because it was so easy to get absorbed within it :3 Love the descriptions, especially when Yuca recalls what the ocean had been like, right before he says my favorite line in here, "Dreams and reality confuse me." Ah, now I shall go read your Kuroshitsuji fic. I loved this 3 very good, senorita.

Oh jeez, tell everybody you can't live without me, hm? :P

But I really love this story. It's going into my FAVORITES. Feel honored. :D

It shows Yucca's personality and depth well, and the deep bond he has with Rain. I like how you wrote it and everything. :)You know how to portray people well.

And it's great to see more fanfics being written for Immortal Rain! D