Heehee. Cute ending. This was a neat story.

Looking forward to your continuation of the Reality Series. Cant wait.

A cameo by Broyles. Neat.

How much longer is this story? Just wondering.

that was great cant wait for more of this and i wonder where you are going next

getting better gurl keep at it i am more than intrigued!

Well you seem to enjoy putting Liv and Charley in more and more peril dont you? I hope Peter will meet up with them again soon.

Oh you and your little cliffhangers. :P

Yay! They're found.

Yeah like I said. School's being a pain but this is still a fun read.

i felt bad for the agent, but glad it wasnt olivia

he has to find her soon!

Yikes! What a trap they set for Peter.

Okay keep writing

Oh no! Why would they do that? They must be really up to something. I hope poor Olivia and Charley get out of that nasty heat soon.

Heh. Evil as always aren't you Mancha.

You know Rekka on F-F makes a good point. I imagine the police would be too corruptive or too incompetent to search for Olivia and Charley. I can totally see Peter taking it all out on his own to find them.

Keep up the good work.

loving it can'r wait for more mancha

Lol this is great. Heh I can imagine what was going through Olivia's head when Charley said "papi". You seem to be going a lil too fast IMO but then you might have something interesting up your sleeve for the next chapter, I bet.

This is an interesting AU. I wasnt expecting Olivia to even appear in this fic at all...and I didnt expect her to be preggers either. You really like this preggers stuff dont you? It's okay I like it too.

Continue please.

i only studied spanish for two years, but from what I can read, you speak it really well. If spanish is your second language, then congrats. :)

I like that Peter and Olivia still manage to find each other, even in an AU. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.