go for more!

You should really continue your story it's a great story.

bumbumbum hoe could u leave it there?


u better update or your gonna see hell for a while!

Well, it's been awhile, but the story continues to be great. Like my other fellow writers, I also hope the gang goes looking for her.

I do hope that you update soon. This is getting very interesting.

pretty good story. I hope you do send the gang off after her though... anyways, keep up the good work.

This is moving along nicely. I'm just wondering iff you have a space adventure planned for the gang or arte they just going to let Ryoko go like that? Any way, great story, and keep it up.

I like it write more no more not writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow! I would have reviewed chapters 1-5 but I didn't want to have my name up six times in a row. Anyways I absolutely adore your story. Please update soon.

Gyyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Work you son of a bitch, work!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry for the cussing. Anyway love your story. Damn FanFiction.Net isn't working. It's not letting my review show up. Grr, I'm pissed. Sorry I'm usually not this mad.

Review for Chapter 6:

Stupid damn review, didn't show up and then Fido said I all ready reviewed! Geez, I hate when it doesn't work! Anyways this is a great story. Damn thing it better show up. I love your story man or woman.

This sounds very interesting. God I use that word a lot. Continue soon.

Another nice chapter. Ryoko seems to be enjoying herself, and maybe even found someone to take her mind off of Tenchi... This is a good story, and I liked theway you described Ryoko and the park. well done.

Awwww! Ryo-ohki is so cute and I really liked the water fight. Is Tenchi ever gonna come looking for her? Or better yet Sasami or Ayeka. Anyway I love it so far PLEASE keep going!!!!!

Ooooh Ryouko looks really kawaii in that picture! ^_~ Never liked Pokemon all that much though, there never seemed to be much of a strong plot to me...oh well never mind! And personally I'd rather Ryouko ended up with Tenchi but whatever, you're the author! ^_^