Agggh my god. You are magnificent, thank you so much for not killing Mace. This was such a pleasure to read and so believable that I'll pretend this was the movie instead.

So good. So, so good. (and thank you for not killing Mace)

Pinbacker died in the way Capa wanted to. Oh, the irony. Yeah this could definitely have been an alternate script for the film. I love the film anyway, its painfully obvious plot holes notwithstanding. This was absolutely beautiful, and I liked how it was a melange of Pod and the film, with of course new and original concepts. Once again, I applaud you for undoubtedly being the best Sunshine writer in the entire fandom. Simply amazing.

Well Pinbacker is a registered sociopath. No surprises there. This is essentially the inverse of Pod, I think.

In a way, this is far, far worse than Penumbra. This time, they're going to die frightened.

Yeah, I'm guessing it's Pinbacker and he sabotaged the ship. Great writing so far.

Gah. I already have a hard time keeping the Pod universe, the Penumbra universe, and the original film universe straight in my head. This all will just compound my confusion

WOW! I can't wait to see where this is going..

"On the flight deck, in the chest of the mission's remaining physicist: a hollowness that might have been joy. Capa was unfamiliar with joy. He felt slightly dizzy; he felt empty. Like the entire purpose of his life had just burned away, in less than a second, seconds ago, in the explosion of the payload.

But: light. Everywhere: light."

I like this part.

That was crazy awesome! I gotta go and read more of your stuff now. I was hopping around and found this and was like wow!

Mace really kept his head together. I think Chris Evans would have loved the chance to play this version of the character.

Nice Challenger tie in. Your details make reading the story just like watching a quality film. This would have made a much more intelligent film.

Damn...

The Mace and Whitby stuff is great-a real connection. Nice to see that Searle is still a mess.

WOW!

I am liking this much more than the original film. Still not sure about the new characters, but Whitby and Mace seem like the most sane of the group. I'm guessing Pinbacker is number 10 to play off the original film.