That was pretty good. I liked it. Though, idk who or what zepp is? great saw fanfict.

To be honest, this guy in the story isnt really a prime candadate to be in a trap. Maybe you should have made it a online gambler who hacks to get money? Well anyway, it just doesn't really fit chopping off his fingers because you dont just use those for gaming and its not like he wronged anybody by gaming he just ruined his life. Now without fingers he would probally be depressed with NOTHING to do because he cant make friends and he cant get a job and he would probally kill himself. This fanfic wasnt thought out much but I still give it a 6/10.

... Okay? I'm scared.

Good story, I love the trap! And it's good to know that there's another fan of both Saw AND TDI on here :D Please do me a favor and check out my Saw/TDI crossover? I don't know any other TDI fans that like Saw or vice versa.