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Ryleee 4/27/11 . chapter 3
I LOVED IT! this made my day Loved the domino's pizza part XD Great work
Night Companion 8/27/10 . chapter 1
I'm sure you got this before, but aww, how sweet! though I'm not sure if the age was appropriate for your characters' actions and thoughts - but, hey, who am I to know?

Hilarious! Kyrie and Nero prank calling Dante (talk about ironic *snicker*) And I loved both of them from beginning to end. They were solid, likable and believable.

Loved the perverted kid getting knocked around. *evil laugh*

There were many parts I enjoyed throughout your story but my absolute favorite was how you finished with Nero daydreaming about becoming Kyrie's knight in shining armor rescuing her someday. And he eventually does just that. Perfect ending.

Thanks for a great, unique read. This was the first story of a young Nero and Kyrie I've come across I really liked!
Shaxira 6/25/10 . chapter 3
First Nero/Kyrie fic I've read ever and it is the BOMB!

I love the cuteness and adorableness of the characters. It makes me squee 3

More chapters please
Kip Tidy 4/10/10 . chapter 2
This is a really cute story! I really like it a lot, I can't wait for more!

... Nero is so cute, he seems like one those kids you just want to tickle or pinch! XD
Clairavance 3/22/10 . chapter 1
Auw Meg! You're on here too? *faves* :)
Vampuric Spider 3/21/10 . chapter 1
Aww young love. I loved all the emotions between the two characters. Keep up the good work.
ShibukisSummoner 3/19/10 . chapter 1
Real cute!

Are second grade teachers allowed to say 'shut up'? I always thought they were for the cuddly stuff (though my second grade teacher was scary as hell...)

But the thing that really got me was the prank call! I got quite a giggle from that.

Bravo!
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