You have a nice writing style.. I like being a critict but could find anything to say. I also like the humer you started off with.

I really really really loved this story. It was sweet and not gloomy. you mentioned his parents deaths but instead of moping about it, robin is remembering good moments he had with his parents. Great job

Awww. :)

Warm Fuzzies.

Great job and fun idea.

likey likey... i likey... i love it!

OMG I can't believe I missed this til now! It was lovely :)

"I think she would have liked you," - favorite bit. too cute :D

Read this while listening to Laura Jansen's cover of Use Somebody.

Man .. Sigh. You're just too good, Ms Em. Too good.

Wow, I LOVED this fic. I don't really know why. But it's random, cute and sweet. And it has ICE-CREAM. Man,I really feel like eating some ice-cream now...

Anyways, awesome fic!

Ammie

Oh, this is a lovely little fic! It is a bit moment-esque, but I can see what you mean about the tone not being right.

Also, I love how you've described the "bond" i.e. Raven instinctively knowing things about Robin without realising that she knew them. A lot of other fics seem to have them talking to each other telepathically, but the way that you've done it is almost exactly how I would imagine it to be.

Lovely work! :)

very nice. i can see why it wouldnt make it into the 'Moments' story, but a good post nonetheless. i must say tho, raven in this one kinda makes me think of Rei Ayanami from Neon Genesis Evangelion. both personalities would fit rather well together.

you know, you could make another one shot or make this one a two shot and write out how robin teaches raven to drive something, whether it be the R-cycle like it says in here or something else. heck, even if not robin, have 'big brother' Cyborg start to teach her to drive the tcar or something. that would make an amusing fic. i could just imagine cyborgs initial response to the request...

anyway, good work

'halfbreed'

sigh.. i really want ice cream now. going to university in the middle of nowhere does no good for my ice cream-eating habit. wonderful little story! raven was interesting in this.. i don't know how to describe it. it was like she wasn't the usually characterization you use, but it still worked wonderfully well. maybe it's just me and the late hour. who knows! loved it! -ash

Hello! n,n

I just LOVE it when Raven acts out of character but in character, hehehe, always leaving dear Richard surprised.

I'm gonna buy some ice .Your fault.

Nice story, always waiting for more.

Demoness Raven

I want ice cream now.

And I can imagine Raven driving Robin's R-Cycle.

Cute!

:)

Stories like this are totally the reason why I think you are one of the best Robin/Raven writers there are. I loved this oneshot...it was so cute. I love stories that show Robin and Raven getting closer through experiences, not just deciding one day that they are in love with each other. And somehow when you write it it just seems so in-character and natural.

Great story.

very sweet moment between the two! I can see how it doesn't fit in with IOTaM, and stands fine all by itself. hmm my favorite flavor of ice cream is French Toast _ (which I haven't seen for sale in 4 years..) ironically, I keep eating French toast and remembering that I don't like it ;