Ah! Deep deep deep! and good for being short. I like lil monologues like these (someday, mark me, someday I'm going to hunt one down and use it for a monologue in Acting class)

Side note: About the Miaka and Chiriko fic, sounds like an interesting pairing. Any sort of pairing is fine by me...unless its with Chichiri and someone other than myself ;

Very angsty, very short, very good. I've never actually seen the episode where Nakago kills Soi, but I like your writing. A few mechanical errors, as the last reviewer said, but nonetheless, it's good. Please R&R my fics. *big puppy dog eyes*

Wo Ai Ni was spelled correctly. However, many other words were not, like break (bresk), wonder(wounder), happiness (happyness), etc. Other than some slight mistakes, this story has lots of emotional angst which was well thought out. You might want to organize the thinking a bit better, because right now it is just a jumble.

"I hate you you now, are glad your dead" is immediately followed by how Soi can never stop loving Nakago. Please also note the misuse of "your".

You're a good writer and have great ideas, but if you read over your work before submitting it, you'll find that you'll have a much better reception from your audience. Keep writing! _

wooo! go poem thingy! nyah! _ if you didn't realize it, this is your 99.9% insane lil friend. i didn't think u had an account for ffn but oh well... call soon, ok? also, you better talk to aaron- i'll email ya bout it. read my story, ok? pleezy pleez? ok. i am taking over this lil window of words. byezness! nyah! _