This might be because I've read to many M rated fanfics (hehe)but I was sureously expecting him to do something reallly wwrong to Mai. So I thank you for not putting that my dear Friend

BB-chan

kawaii!

I've read all your fh

cool !

two thumbs up..

keep up the good work..

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WOAH! Awesome! Grammatically correct and all that. :) If you'd be interested, I'd love to read a bonus chapter. Ideas could be...

-The man escapes from jail with murderous intent for Mai and Naru saves her again, thus they get their first kiss. :)

Sounds good?

Cute!

-Ohime-sama

I really liked this one!

they god he saved her.

MAIxNARU for ever!

Happy New Year!

;-)

awwws Omg wow i was so worried for mai .Really good story i hope you write more.I love how sinister you made the guy and yet you didnt let himget away with it and didnt let slip the plan it was when he though he got away XD I loved it:) adn smiles the ending is sweet too though naru could have kissed her LOL darn that stubborn head. It was still beautiful:)

poor mai

but I always love a courageous and kind naru

he do loves her tea and of course loves her too

wow its so beuatiful

I loved this story

The idea is cruel, but the plot works perfectly with their personalitities )

You have to add: "Next-day newspaper - car accident, one man died..." Yep... Im cruel too...))))

You have a really good imagination you know that? You did a really good job on this one shot and I hope you write more. I promise you that I at least will read and review! Though I never post my Fanfics, I have many. I just haven't had the time to post them. Not to mention the fact that I have to keep up dating them! You ever thought about writing horror novels? 'Cause you'd make a fortune! Anyway, loved the story. And if you have problems with them being OOC just visualize them bickering with each other. That you always works for me! And by the way, HAVE FUN WHEN YOU WRITE! It not only makes the story better, but it has a great impact on your physical health! YAY!

amazing! your an awesome writer!

This is, I believe the fourth time I have read 'Red Ribbons' and it is still as good as it was the first time I read it. great job. I really enjoy your writting.

JT

Words can't describe how much I liked this one-shot, but I'll try. Normally, one shots are awful/sappy/out-of-character/generally-unbearable. This one was the exact opposite of my expectations! I liked reading Naru's thoughts, and how his actions matched his character completely. Crazy villains? Never a good thing, but they always make a great story! This story was nothing short of unforgettable. Impressive!