Aww this is a funny fanfic I'm sad that there will be no sequel :(

I hoenstly think it's amazing that you were able to finish story and be able to keep up the humor. In fact, the jokes got better as it progressed. Sucks that you can't make a sequal though. If someone did, it just wouldn't be the same.

This is great. Do you think you can move your story to the Resistance Fan Fiction and Fanon Wiki?

This is absolutely hilarious. I love the way you've drawn attention to how nobody really seems to pay proper attention to the fact that Hale is infected but hasn't been coverted, which should make him ridiculously valuable yet they keep sending him in to singlehandedly decimate the Chimeran armies..

Awesome story I laughed so hard I fell off my chair! What I find funny is how Hale always 'expresses' his thoughts on everything and you make it funny!

I liked a lot of the humor in it. A few kind of missed thier taget in the comedy but overall for the material you worked with it's really good.

Very good! - made me laugh.. and that is about as 'well rounded' as my reviews get! o.0

LOL. That's all I can really say, especially with Parker's rants and Cartwright. I never thought you could make them comical.

Anyway, keep it up! It's definitey funny! :)