Really good story :)

I liked it !

Thank you for shared this fanfiction :D

YAY! i liked that a lot!

This story was awesome. I luved it. :)

That was a really good story with lots of interesting elements to keep me reading right to the end.

I'd love to read your story, but something is wrong and all the quotations and apostrophes are weird characters. *smiles* I'm sure it's good.

The ending wasn't *that* bad. But good story, I liked it. It was a very interesting way of doing something like that. Also I liked how you handled the 'need to know' stuff, most writters would have just explained everything in a heartbeat.

Nice job.

Great story! Daniel's my favourite SG-1 character. Good to see him take charge. Really enjoyed the story especially the rapport between Daniel and Jack in the beginning.

You end yours better than i can.

This is reaaly good.

Very good. Enjoyed the whole adventure.

Pretty cool. Do another soon! :-D

Great story! I love Daniel!

Neato! Pretty good work. Look forwards to seeing more. PS. How do you keep it so short! Mine drag on forever!

More please!

Very nice! I love where you've taken this and I'm greatly enjoying the smart ass Daniel. He's been haning around Jack WAY too long, I think! But it's a good thing.

Great job so far. I can't wait to see how this ends, especially now that Sakhmet is dead. Or so it seems, right?

Can't wait for the epilogue