Oh my goodness! Please update! This is such a good story! I love how you used the first movie as a base and edited it to fit with Lilly, but didn't stray to far away from the original story! But in the first chapter (or second?) with Raph and hitting a girl, just a little bit OOC, but he's still there and I think you captured him perfectly! I have really fallen in love with the character, Lilly, that you have created! I hope you update soon becauae it is a fantastic story!

Oh, and a side note, I visited your profile and saw you have some X-Men fanfics! Im also a fan of the X-Men and will deffinately be reading and reviewing some of them! :)

This was really well written, but I have discovered that I do not know enough to understand the story at this point. really sorry :( but I won't be able to continue reading this easily.

Of course I loved it!

The character turmoil in this chapter was awesome, but you better update quick with that cliffhanger!

Sorry this review is so short, my hand still hurts.

I finally read it! I'm so sorry it took me this long, what is wrong with me? Oh wait, I know: SCHOOL!

Sorry, mini rant over.

I actually really enjoyed this, and it had a nice explanation in there for the people who are less versed in this world than you, thanks for that!

I like Lilly, she's sweet.