Very nice. Eve is a favorite character of mine, and I've always seen Dallas as redeemable, not just some lowly scumbag. I like the way you portrayed both characters here. The narrative flowed well throughout the story. Job well done!

That was a really sweet story. I like how you kept them in character and how your 3rd person managed to smoothly get into Eve's head. I really like your writing style!

Omgosh, this is amazing.
I loved every bit of it!
The description and precise
wording were phenomenal.
It's nice to see Dallas in a
good light seeing as he's
always bad-mouthed.

I love it! Thanks for
writing this! (: