wow, that was awsome! actually, your whole numeral series is! I really loved how you portrayed heero and maybe some scenorios (spelling?) of how he came to think the way he did(or does?). i really liked how he came into contact with all of them too, except at the moment i cant remember wufei, but im sure he was in there. anyway, sorry, rambling on, but your story was great! sorry, no helpful or constructive criticism here, i cant think of anything that could have been better!

Beautiful. . . That was truly beautiful. You are an amazing writer, gifted with such ability that if I tried to describe it I would fall painfully short and disgrace it. That was incredibly moving, and through half of it, I could not breath as I scrolled down the page. Heero's memory of the little girl shattered me, and I could have sworn that for a moment I understood and felt exactly what he did, and I wanted to cry but found that I couldn't. I will be forever awed by this story.

This was good! I like the concept that Heero had seen all of the other pilots including Zechs while he was still young. I REALLY liked this story! It was GREAT!

Truly put out perfectly. Keep writing!

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