| Reviews for The Marriage Contracts Redux |
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OoOXylionOoO 5/15/13 . chapter 1My, my it was a great first chapter, very interesting ! |
shine25 4/30/13 . chapter 5I love this story. Your a really good author. |
Fullmetal11791 4/30/13 . chapter 4Forgot to click the favorite list button, doing so now. |
Fullmetal11791 4/30/13 . chapter 5Can't believe I had overlooked this story for so long. Saw it was a rewrite and had just assumed it wasn't going to be very interesting. Well, jokes on me I guess. Anyway, really loved this story. Was packed with quite a few laughs, was well written, was to the point and not drawn out, and was just an all around fun read. Gonna add to my fav list. |
mizfoo 4/26/13 . chapter 5brilliant. i like how they kept the secret till the end |
Susan M. M 4/22/13 . chapter 5A fit fate for Tom Riddle. |
slayer99 4/18/13 . chapter 5brilliant story, it looked like it was going to be to short but actually is perfect |
Buraikhoi 4/11/13 . chapter 5I'm horrified that it took me this long to find this fic. I love every part of it: the drama, the banter, the recurring gag of tricking Dumbledore, etc.. It did strike me that something was a bit off about the Headmaster given how his alignment seemed to pendulum between his Greater Good persona to Complete Monster, so that could have been better elaborated, I guess. I also couldn't see the narrative significance behind having Remus die a vilified death but then I might be biased given how I have always perceive him as the good guy in canon. But at any rate, excellent prose and outstanding storytelling. Thank you for your contribution to the HP community and all the best with your future works :D |
Shalarean 4/10/13 . chapter 5This is my first Harry/Daphne and I loved it! Nicely done! It made staying up til midnight worthwhile! _ |
HoosierCullen 4/10/13 . chapter 5Great fic the first real H/DG I have read will have to read others. |
adafrog 3/29/13 . chapter 5This was awesome! Thanks. |
Kimzona 3/24/13 . chapter 5I liked this. :) |
Wishfull-star 3/19/13 . chapter 5lol this story was great:) |
Prongs of P.A 3/2/13 . chapter 5 Just a note - you seem to have your years off. Quote February 1, 2026 Wudubucca-bern The Ancestral Dumbledore family home: "Thank you for coming." The old man wheezed. "I wasn't sure that you would. Forty Six year old Harry Potter stood grimly next to the bedside of the ancient wizard, Neville Longbottom at his side. End Quote Harry wouldn't be 46 at that point for a few months, but the next scene has it in 2027, so maybe a typo? All of that said, GREAT STORY, though, a few more scenes where Harry and Neville play Dumbles for a fool would be nice. |
chaosglory626 2/28/13 . chapter 5Damn, and here I was hoping for mandrakes to be killing Voldemort. I wish you'd tied off Luna with someone, at least with the Scamander guy she apparently got in canon. Great story. |