Aww, I was hoping this would have continued just to see more of the dynamic duo!

Fantastic job with the writing!

Now that's a lucky break for the duo.

I love their simple touches D

I still love the dynamic between the X5 duo!

I love it!

Max and Alec are adorable in this! I really wanted her to kiss him on his forehead or even chance it and plant one on his lips.

Oh I love this! The concept and how you describe their thoughts and actions was fantastic!

How many unfinished stories do you have? It would have great to have another chapter or two. But it was a nice ending.

just wanted to say that i was touched by this short story...and very dissapointed there isn't more...

still awesome! loved this story

great story

Holy sh-! That was just plain DIRTY!

Excellent. That's much more like it. But, now I'm completely sure that I'm going to hate it when this fic ends.

Maybe different, but still thoroughly enjoyable. Good chapter, but I am beginning to worry that they won't fully hook up by the end of the fic.

I am sitting here with a huge grin spread across my face. That was so sweetly perfect. I have the feeling that I'm really going to wish this were longer than 5 chapters.

Oh! You have written a great start. And you completely HOOKED me with that last paragraph. Wow.

Oh. Sad. Well, I guess ending it there works ok. If it has to..

I really liked it, how they were just there for each other and not fighting or having mad passionate sex (not that I object in any way to those fics, I love them too). It was sweet and loving. -warm fuzzies-