I like your DM-stories (aw, Jesse-stories

Have you think about writing more?

Nice story with an interesting ending. Thanks, Beth Palladino

Awesome story! i really enjoyed it.

I really liked this story! This deserves a sequel. A lot of people have Jesse get into trouble while recovering at the beach house. I think that that'd be great for this story. But that's just my opinion. Anyway, please keep writing stories as good as this one.

Jesse'sBIGGEST!Fan

wow! what a GREAT story!

Woah, great story! I really enjoyed it! I enjoy just about anything with Jesse! But it was great! Very well-written! Keep it up girl! God bless!

What a great story! and really well written too, it was so emotional and I felt so sorry for Jesse when Mark shouted at him! I hope you write more! Keep up the great work! Maria :-)

Well thought up story,these stories are getting better all the time!

Keep it coming!

wow! (first word that comes to mind) This is a great story so far! I'm loving every minute of it, as i always do whenever Jesse is involved. isn't he great! Come on, write up, i gotta see what happens in the next chapter!

Halina Renata

Please continue this soon, this is good.

excellent story please write more soon!

This is a great start. Poor old Jesse, I am looking forward to finding out why Mark is so upset.

Tracy

Hi, great story. Can't wait to see why this case is driving Mark so crazy,

that he even hurts Jesse's feelings! I hope the next part is coming soon!

this is a great story so far keep up the good work cant wait to find out how Maek will catch the bomber!