what the why was he going to paris and what the heck it ended way to soon

but all in all it was a great story

I really like the story.

loved it update soon

aww. how sweet.

Well I came across this story during my Trory kick and I love it. (Whenever I get kinda obsessed w/ something I get on one of my kicks and I sorta have a one track mind so yeah now I'm babbling.) This was a well written story and fun to read. Since it was written ages ago I'm looking for a sequel next. I hope there's one or I might get violent. Ok done now cuz I'm off to read more and picture CMM (how can he be getting married? AUGH!)

hi! i REALLY like your dialogue in this chapter!

OH wow that fell apart. The first few chapters were mind-blowingly good...witty, well-written, engaging...then suddenly the plot became stale, Tristan's lines became cliche, action became minimal...Luke&Lore replaced the Trory almost 80% of the time...and I don't care that it's a lovey-dovey ending...but what was that? like 200 words per update?...It's always a shame when really good stories that obviously took a lot of effort& time to write, and was apparently appreciated...dwindles into something like this.

Gosh you have the wit down so well...and that's like 90% of what makes a Trory writer realy awesome...so yeah :-) Love this story...and this line made me laugh so much, just thought I'd share:
“That I’m taking it to Kissing Point and making a woman out of it. Geez Mary, what do you think? I’ll drop it off at your place. Now, would you care to escort your backpack? I mean, you shouldn’t leave her unattended. Think of all the sleazy people in the world,

GREAT STORY! i just wish you made a sequal! do u still plan too? omg...
“I was going to say sneezing. Not your generic brand, spontaneous, all-of-a-sudden-out-of-nowhere type sneezes mind you. I’m talking hard-core, builds-up-for-five-minutes, makes-you-walk-away-with-squeezed-eyes-like-you’ve-lost-your-glasses type sneeze. I like the anticipation, the suspense. You know that’s coming and it gonna be a biggie when it finally happens. Pseudo sneezes suck though!”
“Pseudo sneezes?”
“Like the aforementioned sneeze, only no delivery.”
That part i love! lol where do u get these ideas? email me if u make a sequal!

Hey! Remember me? huh?
Lol well I haven't been on that much recently but I'm sick and at home so I thought that I'd read up on some Trories and then I came across this and I was reading and I thought hm this all sounds a little familiar. Then I get to this chapter and POOF there is my name! hahahahaha Sorry I'm super amused right now. Well I'm off to read the next chapters cuz I can't wait to see how it ends and lookie I REVIEWED TWICE! yay me!
Yup so I'll shut up and go read now!

ok, i know this is an old story but oh my god I LOVE THIS LINE:

“Meaning?”

“That I’m taking it to Kissing Point and making a woman out of it. Geez Mary, what do you think?"

that was sheer brilliance. im serious. i LOVE your writing and i love this story...so keep up the good work! *salute*

very good... but the ending really needed to be better

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL...

So, where do you think I could find a hypnotherapist? I think I need one.

Tristan's gone? WAHHH! Excellent song choice, excellent song!