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ZoeyBug 4/10/10 . chapter 4
Whew. Wow.

Okay, so I have decided that smut is your specialty.

That was HOT. Loved it.
SMacked Hard 4/10/10 . chapter 4
This was a great series. ;D Great job, Brina.
Crys 4/10/10 . chapter 4
A set of meals prepared by Danny..It s so sexy..

you r so creative XDXD

i guess we r going to hv a Montana styled of this story as well..haha
Dine89 4/9/10 . chapter 4
Wow, that was hot. I totally love it! Great way to end a really awesome story :) Will you do a story about Lindsay's reward?
afrozenheart412 4/9/10 . chapter 4
Oh-kay. Not only do you have me hungry for a piece of fruit and ice cream now ;) but that was one of the HAWTEST things that I've read. After a day away, you spring smut on me. I should take more days off, right? :D

Seriously, I could see her teasing eyes flash at him while she was taunting him about 'repeats.' Not to mention, I could see how dark and predatory his got when he watches her fall apart...so much fun and so sexy!

Favorite lines

"She had thought that a whole dedicated to spoiling her had been an awesome idea. Back then she hadn't had an idea what else he had planned though.

Danny was the perfect boyfriend for Lindsay. He wasn't easy to handle. He didn't say yes to everything yet he wasn't an arrogant idiot who only cared for his own interests. And pleasure. He was truly in love with her and he never got tired of showing that to her. He also never got tired of showing her how much he desired her."

"Lindsay could only stare at the man with his grin, fully aware of how right he was with what he had just said. "God, you have an ego for a whole football team," she said, shaking her head at him."

"Lindsay knew when Danny planned something for her. That this day would turn out to be that wonderful she hadn't expected though. Of course she wanted more. And she would make sure she would do something sexy like that for him as well."
SMacked Hard 3/31/10 . chapter 3
I loved it! ;D Please, update soon.
rhymenocerous 3/31/10 . chapter 3
So smoking hot! Who wouldn't want a sensual full-body massage from Danny? Whew... I think I need a fan in here, like right now! I am so glad that you started this story - so sexy. I'm sad that it's a four-shot though and we're already on number 3. *sigh*. But I know you have lots more up your sleeve for other stories, so I will look forward to those as well!

Great work!
Dine89 3/31/10 . chapter 3
Wow, definitley my favorite chapter so far. That was really really hot. Danny is such a tease :) Can't wait to find out what you've planned for the next chapter and of course for your new story :)
afrozenheart412 3/31/10 . chapter 3
FREAKING HAWT! Wow, I'm dizzy after this. To have Danny not only relax her by giving Lindsay a massage with a cherry flavor oil, but to also have them make love to each other separately yet still connected. Wow.

That is all I can say on how hawt this was, nothing was neglected on Lindsay's body. "Her eyes sparkled in anticipation. "And I hope you know that I'm expecting those Montana days more often from now on."

Laughing, Danny pulled Lindsay closer against his body, kissing her lovingly before he wrapped her bathing robe around her again." And that was the perfect way to end that chapter, with a little humor and a lot of love. EXCELLENT JOB!
SMacked Hard 3/26/10 . chapter 2
I loved it, Brina! :D Great job!
madmush 3/26/10 . chapter 2
I love, love, love it! After my crappy working day yesterday (don't ask) it was a great to have some DL smut (gotta get my smut from somewhere!)

Anyway, I love how Danny gets Lindsay all riled up & is cocky (no pun intended) enough to tell her how much she wants him!

I do have a request though. Now you've mentioned the 'human table', you've got to write the story. You can't tease us with things like that & leave us hanging. Unfair! I can only imagine where that & this story will go to next, but I never get close to where you go so why bother, although the imagining can be fun!

Oh, and the dog came first today! Yep, I didn't have to leave here looking at me with a sad face. Crisis averted - for yesterday at least!
JESSMARY25 3/25/10 . chapter 2
Very seductive Mr. Messer, I love that! :)
Dine89 3/25/10 . chapter 2
It's awesome. I think this chapter was even hotter that the first on :)

But my favorite line was definitley "Nah, you told me not to leave the kitchen while the stove is on." Lol, Danny is so cute.

Can't wait for the next one ;)
Dine89 3/25/10 . chapter 1
WOW! That was pretty hot. I love it!
rhymenocerous 3/25/10 . chapter 2
Holy cow, that was hot! You had me squirming, right along with Lindsay, wondering what Danny had in store for her! And you definitely didn't disappoint. Feeding each other finger food in the bathtub? Genius, and the description of their lovemaking - clinging to him like a rock in a wild river - AMAZING! I love it. Can't wait for dinner ;)
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