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Trumpet-Geek 6/22/06 . chapter 3
Yeah.. No one's ever surprised me on V-day either. While reading your fics, I've come to a conclusion.

RelenaFanel writing hilarity
Shinzuku 11/15/05 . chapter 3
This fic was the type of change that I needed. Ive definitely been reading too many angst filled stories lately. It was cute & definitely got me to chuckle. _
KnighteWolfe 1/25/03 . chapter 1
Okay, I like this story so far. However, it doesn't flow all that well. You have it going pretty good for a little bit, then you start to flit around like a Hummingbird in a hurry. My suggestion is to stop every once in awhile as you write and read it to see if it flits around. 9 times out of 10 you'll catch yourself starting to jump around with details and the story will suffer.

Other than that one bit of advice, I love the story.

Keep up the good work.

Knightewolfe

p.s. don't worry sometimes I flit around like that when I write my stories.
Cyberwing 1/17/03 . chapter 3
love ur story!
DarkAngel34 1/17/03 . chapter 1
I havent started to read this but im gonna start! ''''
Cruel Destiny 1/17/03 . chapter 3
HAHAHA...! This story is SOOOO funny! I like it how everyone turned out happy in the end neway.. all coz of one stupid love letter... lol..

Well, keep writing!

ciao!

Cruel Destiny
DBZGurl26 8/21/02 . chapter 2
hey, i love ALL of ur gw stories...it's all really, really, really good and funny...pleaze continue to update it as well as write more thx...DBZGurl26
Fenrir Barton 8/4/02 . chapter 2
Tell me the ratings of This is not my day and topic! Keep writing! Its a work of Art! Trowa and Dorothy make a cute couple! email me!
Kiyoko 7/28/02 . chapter 2
Oh my gosh this story is so funny. i love it! please come out with the next chapter soon!
lmc 6/1/02 . chapter 1
LOL! What a screwed up Valentines Day! lol! This is a good story! Keep writing!
Artemis Noemi Nightingale 2/5/02 . chapter 1
Wow that was long.
Starknight 2/3/02 . chapter 1
Thanks for giving me a much needed laugh! I enjoyed

this one so much i went back and read all your other

stories. Hilarious!
Adrenaline Junkie 2/3/02 . chapter 1
YEAH! A stpry that has the couple paired just the way I like! Don't you like it Conner?

No...

Come on my demionic muse! you must like it!

No...

Fine be that way! He's in a bad mood. Anyway, I like it a lot! Please continue!

Jai
silencioporfavor 2/3/02 . chapter 1
OMIGAWD! *rolling around and gasping for breath* THAT WAS SO DAMN FUNNY! I was laughing from the begining to the end, and couldn't even get a drink of Sprite in between. LOL, I absolutly CAN'T WAIT for the next chapter if it's as funny as this one! *still laughing her ass off* Keep writing, ja ne! _
Raven 2/3/02 . chapter 1
That was funny with the pillow!_ please update soon!_sorry about all the !'s. I had to do that! ;)
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