Second chapter. Make a second chapter. Make it now. Make a second chapter. That is all.
By the way, could you please make a second chapter?
Make a second chapter.
Second chapter. You. Make.
Chapter make. You. Second.
Make a second chapter.

Amazing! Better than the book. You truly are a gifted writer. Please do continue.

Thank you for the most fascinaring reading.

It was very interesting to read your view on what should happen after Breaking Dawn.

Especially since i almost imagine the same. Aro and Cauis have been playing this deadly game of chess for thousands of years, there is no way they loose to cullens:)

Team Volturi all the way.

wait...it's complete? how can you say that? What type of horrible person are you? Are you intentionally trying to kill me? No! No way! You have to do more, even in another story that continues this! You can't stop, you hear me, you can't, you just can't! I am a dedicated reader, and I am saying, 'don't you dare stop or I'll call the Volturi on you!'

No excuses. Go write more of it, right now. Or I will rally angry readers against you, and we will defeat you like the volturi defeating a single human! So ha!

GO WRITE!

Yes ! Yes

! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! THAT IS SO FIZZIN' COOL! YOU MANAGED TO CAPTURE ALL THEIR PERSONALITIES WITHOUT A SINGLE FLAW! IT'S COMPELLING AND OSSIM AND OH SO COOL! AND YOU BETTER WRITE MORE! AND NO I WILL NEVER STOP TALKING IN CAPS! ALL THESE OTHER FANFICTION STORIES ARE IMITATIONS OF THE CHARACTERS, BUT YOU PRACTICALLY MATERIALIZED THEM! IT'S SO FREAKING OSISM! WRITE MORE! YOU BETTER WRITE MORE! WRITE,WOMAN OR MAN OR WHICHEVER YOU ARE, WRITE!GO WRITE!

i quite enjoyed that. the volturi and thier scheming, cuniving (?) selves. loved it. write another one!

I think that you've portrayed the Volturi really well here. Reading it through their eyes suddenly made me hate the Cullens, and even though I was never a fan of them, I've never come across a story that made me believe with a passion that the Volturi were absolutely right. I also like how you've stuck to Aro's character and made him believable. Also, Renesmee's gift is so realistic that it makes me wonder if Stephenie Meyer actually thought of that and hid it inside Breaking Dawn for us to figure out.

*hands cookie*

Hi,

wow! this is so clever, the way you've explained why Aro left and how he plans to get revenge. I like how you've added to rennesme's talent too.

I think you should carry on with this it's really really good.

oh wow this was amazing, you should continue it and write how the cullens finally fell, i would totally read it if you did.

I quite like this fic. Your interpretation of the Volturi is very clever, and your overall treatment of Aro's character is both accurate and impressive. Furthermore, this fic is remarkably true to canon, and a strong one-shot (though I really do wish it were longer :D ).

Good work :)

-Kyilliki