You hit the characters off so nicely. Sniff. I'm so glad Xander was there to see her safely home. Sniff. Lovely story. Sniff. I really liked the idea of the kite. Sniff. No more please, though, that was sweetly sad enough.

This almost made me cry. I've got goosebumps. It's a nice thought, isn't it? If this truly had happened...wow, that would be nice.

You are truly a extraoridany characterzations hit the spot and you write humor and agnst as if you knew it all well. I deeply love all your stories, continue writing i love your perspective on things

Absolutely LOVED it! :D