I DON'T KNOW WHERE YOU GET YOUR SENSE OF HUMOR, BUT PLEASE KEEP IT UP AND GOING.

Ah, gotta love Emmett! Thanks for sharing the laughs.

Get that marvelous going!

I almost fell out of my chair reading this line "Kidnap Bella; Castrate Julian; Find a priest to perform a quick exorcism." Muhahaha!

Well be brave my smut peddler, you peddle your smutty wares very well. Badge of honor.

I side with Missypooh: he is being Edward; slow and cautious . . . I think it's a fabulous chapter - a necessary one . . . come on, we actually suffered through three entire fucking books of Edward not committing physically to Bella. . . LOL. And then what happened? Meyers had to snub us - and so us lusty dingdongs are prowling the net like horny courgars thrusting Bella and Edward into the sheets in some pretty randy and bizarre scenarios to make up for it ... forever. It'll take forever for us to satisfy. I wonder how many lemons I've lusted over? I've even written numerous ones . . . .so a few chapters in one book of Reserveward isn't going to kill anyone's libido. In fact - it'll stoke it. LOL Oh . . . there I go.

This made me love Jasper even more. LOL Thanks.

Oh such a thrill - a shout out to our youthful days, is it? Now why pray tell is Bella not quite a fan of Closer by our beloved NIN? *sigh* - she frustrates me as well . . . I empathize with Edward sometimes. I like how Edward's coming out of his repressed shell . . . he's becoming Awareward

I'll pop in some literary criticism - well written, very cannon. These are the things I love most about all of these characters. Emmett's twisted wit, Alice's upbeat outlook and snide issues with Edward . . . and so on. I think - though very much outside of the realm of the originals - you've really made a strong effort to stick to everything per canon and it's made for a very good book so far.

I love Denseward. He's so - brick headed and stubborn. It's charming in an off putting sort of weirdo way that he has. :)

Damn - no bets on Alice today, hunh? Well written . . . you made me cry already and got my pulse going. Good good.

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Missypooh is right, IMHO... Edward is being Edward;
contempletive, cautious and sensitive. Were I laying in
Bella's place it would freak me out if he moved really
fast and dove right in! He's doing so well...I'm so
proud of him! ;-)

.GOD! I'm laughing so hard I can barely see to
type...Emmett is hysterically insane and altho I'm
cracking up, his descriptions are highly erotic...I say
as I'm sliding off the chair to the floor!
Great writing! ;-)

heartbreakingly painful. i am eager to see how this story unfolds :)