niiice

love this so far! hoping to read more of it later!

Love this story so far! hoping to read more!

i've only just started reading this, but it is quite interesting, the way you've changed the way bella and edward met and the way she's grown up. it eliminates the drama of bella finding out edward is a vampire later in life. i noticed you haven't updated, possibly due to lack of drive, but i can say i await the day you update, your writing style is exceptional and your characters are somewhat unique from the many cliched and mediocre personalities.

Please update. This is an original idea and it's a good one that should be completed. I don't see many good originals that are completed. Many are just put on Haitus which shouldn't happen. I'd love to see how this alternate version of Bella and Edward's love story turns out.

I just found this story thanks for doing it.

Need more... Please? I can't begin to express how disappointed I was when I got to the end of the chapter and there was no stinking "Next" button! I'm loving this too much for it to be over.

CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE

I'm loving this... Emmett as the over-protective dad is great!

I am loving Rosalie as Bella's mom- what a unique twist! It sounds like Rose is happy with Bella as her daughter, and content with the idea of Edward turning Bella. Epic WIN!

good chapter

Please keep writing!

Can't wait for more

This is a great story :) can't wait for the next chapter 3

i love the story please update soon

LOVED IT!