Please bring more

I read this whole story today, and I have to say, it was very good! I enjoyed every twist and turn in this heart pounding sotry of yours. I have to ask, what is the next story called? So, I can see what happens next!

I thought the whole thing was AWESOME! I loved it! Poor Jason! And poor Charlie! Anyways! Loved it and can't wait to read more of what you have done. Keep writing!

Britt

Yay! Jason bashing is fun, but I'm glad he's not dead. This is a very cool idea, and I enjoyed this story a lot.

OMG that was amazing! I loved every bit of it! I'm super super excited for No Heroes in This World! I hope you put it up soon! :)

i am soooo excited for No Heroes in This World! i love angsty, darker stories (im weird...) so it sounds perfect. its so bizarre, thinking that in this chapter, jason is dead. dead dead dead. also, i want to marry Tetra.

Oh yay! Charlie's gonna find a way to bring Jason back to life! For a moment there I thought that they were both doomed! Thanks so much for taking me on an awesome ride! You can rest assured that I will be looking for your new story very soon!

Wow, Charlie thinks about Jason dying alot. Maybe its some one elses turn? Say, Emma? Or perhaps finding his long lost father in danger? Just sayin. I love the stories! I really do. Its just allways about Jason dying... why not shake things up a little? just a suggestion. After you're done with No Heros. Mk?

You killed Jason, how you sleep at night? you cruel woman.
Poor Charlie, he'd do anything for his little brother.

One word: huh?

How could you kill Jason? Please tell me he is not really dead. Please let him live. I can just imagine how Charlie is feeling. I was 100% crying as much as you were when I read this. My stomache actually dropped as I was reading this. Please update ASAP!

You...you just killed Jason Landers.
No.
Just no.
Must listen to happy music...
*sob*

You better have been crying! THis was so sad! Terrible! Although I have written a story featuring a dead Jason too and yeah it does kinda kill the author too doesn't it? Poor Charlie! I loved all the emotion and description you but it! It truely broke my heart. I NEED to know what happens! Please hurry!

NO!

I'm crying! *lol*
Please, Jason must live! Poor Charlie"!

Please, upload soon!

OMG! You're not the only one who got teary! Poor Charlie! He's lost his little brother! Jason's DEAD! NO! JASON! *sob sob*
*sniffle* Y-you better *sob* UPDATE SOON!