This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.

well your lemon was great im currently writing my first one to its an avatar the last airbender one sokka and suki

It was great and it was cute

Good For A First Try.

Not bad. I raed bb/rea fun fic. all the time. This is what I call a average love story. I have read a few stories like that so to tell you a lot of lemons lack in really detail on raven and beast boy's love and mainly tells about their lust and desires. It's refreshing to read this love story/lemon. But make sure that next time raven and beast boy don't keep repeating on what their dialect beacuse the quoted "I love yous" were one too many for this lemon. But in other news I would give it an 8 out of 10.

What the hell are you talking about that was an amazing lemon with great detail if you catch my drift( bow Chic wow WOW) thats just something I say when I find an awsome lemon and I don't say that a lot so that shows just how good it really is please write more lemon stories like a rave and cyborg or bb and star just as a change cause there are not a lot of them out there in great detail and I am sure that U can make one as good as this one so please don't be mad at my suggestion for other people already have and hate me for it.

Wow.. that was your first lemon? That was really good, and very smexy. I personally thought my first one sucked ass, but other people seemed to like it lol.

It would really mean alot to me if you read and reviewd my lemon in "the beast boy and Raven fan club" anyways great fic and keep up the good work :)

Nice story of showing how much love they have for each other. :D

Also I know how you mean when writing An M-rated story as I've tried, but it's so hard to finish. :(

Still it was a great story coming form you and I would like to encourage you upon keeping up the good work on such great ideas like this for future story reads. ;)