Ooh, this is interesting! :D hopefully future chapters to come?

So, I like it so far, but you might want to find a beta or a spell checker. Those are your best friends with writing 3 Good plot so far, but it would help to find a beta or spell checker! Ciao

Oooooh! The plot thickens!

I like the concept of a bluebird demon. Very cool idea.

Please post another chapter soon!

Amu Tsukiyomi

(I would have been more detailed, but I'm writing this whilst being extremely tired, so I apologize for that)

Please, please, please continue this. I'd love to see where it goes, expecially if they don't actually end up being brother and sister and then they fall in love!

Kyoxoc FTW!