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this is fantastic. for me this is one of the saddest, most sweet moment in scenes i've ever seen, and i found you really captured the emotion. good job.

Not bad at all! It fits that a beautiful moment in D2 would be beautifully translated into a narrative. You should be proud- this is good work and reminded me of when I first saw the cutscene, which made me heartbroken. :3

Like I said, this is good stuff and you should keep writing! :D