I agree with Anonymous Angel, about the whole Starlight pairing. (you never know Chibi-Usa could have a large forehead like Taiki and then that would be just strange.)Never liked the paring Senshi/Starlights. (But I'm not gonna rant here.)

Anyway, I like how you wrote this. Mamoru is a smug man isn't he? Full of himself. XD And I just remembered what that horrid green shirt looked like.

Is Mamoru trying to advertise or something with that shirt? :P

Oh while you're at it could you get Usagi to get rid of that God-awful green blazer of it? And maybe throw a few Burning Mandala's at it? XD

Good job I like it. :D

Keep goin'.

FUNNY! Much improvement in your style of writing!

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I've been able to get lost fav archives this way for my reading pleasure!

It's a slow going process but those 2 sites are putting back what geocities

stole from you and the reading community... If you can't find your site among the

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Please pass this info on to others who have lost their geocities accounts and for those

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Look forward to your next installment! But PLEASE keep it a Usagi/Serena X Mamoru/Darien

story! No Starlight love PLEASE! Unless it's one sided and Bunny stay true to her prince! Starlights X Outters better pairing! maybe...0; P

This story if awesome and funny lol keep up the good work

I know you secretly love that shirt. Just like you love his top hat. You know when he transforms and it goes on his head and his arm outstretched all sexy like. )

Anyway, I love this story and him mysteriously appearing on the bench (I wonder whose idea that was), because you know I love Darien/Mamoru, silly Earth shirt or not. We procrastinate too much!

So funny! I remember watching the show and thinking to myself how UGLY the Earth Shirt is! I'm glad someone finally decided to destroy it...

but I luved tht shirt...it was so funny howd he weared it and his whole bg and stuff but I still like the shirt... hey! if u do another ch, maybe u can also but in it was his fathers!