Oh, reading this made my evening. Thank you, LuCarly, it's great to read a story that not only advocates equality, but is well-written and humorous to boot.

Hrm... In terms of description, I think something went wrong here; "short and messy", but Mikage's hair is not at all messy D:

"someone of great intelligence and cunning"...? Cunning what? D: Cunning wit? D:

"A women" should be "A woman"

I think Mikage was a bit too OOC here. I understand that she has matured since being a lowly secretary, but she hasn't really gained as much ferocity as that.

Hrm...

It was a lovely idea though and I can see that you had fun writing this piece about your favorite character! D

The ending was very sly and entertaining, it was an overall satisfying piece D

haha

go Mikage! D

HA, that was brilliant! XD Go Mikage!

It's very sweet, Mikage is such a strong character, and those idiots learned their lesson.

Tch Tch Tch... Bunch of perverts xd. I like this, though I'm not a Coastershipper...