Hi again.

How come they never use any comm gear?

Or cell phones?

Hi.

I am reading it and while plotline is good, you have made Michael sound and act like an impulsive bratty teenage drama queen.

He's far more composed and together and the way you have portrayed him is way beyond alternate universe or whatever term is hip these days to describe characteristics not present in the original show.

That being said, keep writing. But try to portray characters as they are depicted in the show. That's the whole point of 'fanfiction', correct?

Cheers!

Great story! Got a late start on reading this series. Off to read the second one now and will be sure to leave an actual full review when I get all caught up. :-)

Oh poor Michael.

SPECTACULAR! This is THE best story I have ever read!

Can't wait to read Demon :)

Great story, I'd love it, beside I'd never start it reading the summary.

Sometime I disagreed about how fast relationship were evolving, but I see it was necessary.

just read the whole story in one go. stuck lieing down due to a spinal problem, every episode thoroughly enjoyable am going to start on the 2nd part now please keep up the good work. love the short chapters especially the ones that give a deeper insight into the characters.

HO-LEE SHEEEIIT. You've got me gobbling up every single word.

Can't talk now. Have to read Demons.

*HL

Hi, i just finished reading your storey. Excellent! I really enjoyed it. Now, on to the next one...

I can't believe Monsters is complete. It's a good thing Demons' first chapter is already up, because you're right: this story doesn't seem finished.

So Fiona's mad at Michael (who could blame her?), Michael is bewildered and in a very 'uh-oh' state, Sam is less trusting, and there'll be a sequel. I can't wait to see what you have planned.

Keep writing!

-Vendetta

Glad Michael shot Frank, that man was a dirt-bag. Can't wait to read more.

I'll admit that the last two paragraphs kind of confused me. Are Ruth and Virgil dead?

*still twitching from Micheal shooting down Frank*

Now I'm getting really curious about the sequel. Its title, its plot, its villain...I can't wait!

Keep writing!

-Vendetta

The darker side of Sam, the plot summarization, the twisted emotions, the shattered hearts, the suspense! I can't believe this story is coming to a climax. Thankfully, there'll be a sequel soon. *grinning madly* Keep writing!

-Vendetta

Ohh, I'm late to review! I'd just read this...for the last short one, it was very good. It showed the emotions of Michael's past and tied to the storyline very well.

I can't believe it...a sequel? *squeals out happily*

Keep writing! Now I'm off to read the next chapter.

-Vendetta

AWWWWWWWWWWW. :-D love it!