Loved this fic over on AFFN - so glad to see it posted here!

Very nice story, I like Gabriel! The part where he transformed back into the archangel was great. Maggie's death was also very well done and sad. Try not to use the same word twice in the same paragraph :). I don't think the first paragraph was actually necessary at all, especially as it did not match up to the standard of writing of the rest of the story, and only turns you off reading on. But I'm glad I did read on - a great Prophecy fic.

try not ending your story with the end. For some reason it makes me feel like back in second gr when you had to write fairy tales and have to write the end at the end for a closer. I liked it even though i havent seen Prophesy3 but it looks like that I am going to have to watch it...

Good fic.