woo hoo! great story about i ship that i dont' read very often! i loved your OCs. hope they show up in the sequel too! ^^ good work

Lots of fun!
A great story!
And Severus is just grand. I can't stop imagining him in all the outfits you put him through! And the percings!
I'll sure I'll have as much pleasure reading the sequel (though I hope it will focus more on Harry/Severus... All their interactions in here have been making me anxious to see MORE!)

The microwave bit just did me in. I could just see Harry going into a rant about it:

"Who the f*ck steals a microwave!? There's a computer right there! What the hell!?"


And then the way Snape tries to play it off, golden.

WOW! This was absolutely amazing. You are a talented writer, I enjoyed your story immensely. I am looking forward to reading the sequel to this.
xx Nikki

Even though it's only the first chapter, I feel like drawing Snape's Look of Horror(o-o)
All I have to say is that I love it so far and will keep on reading!
Keeping doing what you do best!

-Lawliet

Great job on this story!

another great chapter! this story is fantastic! it's very original and very well-written!

great chapter. phenomenal chapter. great job!

great chapter! i love the conspiracy!

great chapter! awfully cosy those two are getting!

fantastic chapter! i loved the maturity severus snape showed!

they kissed! and now they hate each other. great chapter!

great chapter!

great chapter!

great chapter! lol... the poor microwave!