Awh, Tessa. It's so cute. I'm loving the switch you made from commedial fiction to romance. Although this one made me giggle at points to. You are just so super amazing at writing!

Aw...! I thought you did a great job! I really don't know who these people are, but I already know you did this couple justice! LOVE IT! Especially the marriage proposal! YAY! You know me! I get all giggly! I LOVED IT! I thought the dialogue was really good. Some people do really lame dialogue like:

"Look at that!"

"It is a fish!"

But you actually make it sound natural. GREAT job! ;-D

Please have Jeff to be okay.

Too CUTE! :D I loved it...I wish that would happen. oh my god i was so upset about Maria being released as well. But atleast we can see her in Celebrity Apprentice (Is that what ist called?) and Jeff on TNA! Loved the one shot :D

Love, Josie :D