hey if you're writing a story for From Beyond could you please end it better for our poor Herbert? That ending sucked bananas. I say let the cool black guy live, kill meg oops I mean Katherine(why they cast Meg as her is beyond me) *shudder* she kisses our Herbert...blech shouldn't that be illegal? Anyway I like THIS story hope to see more soon.

Just reading the first chapter, her description seems a bit... Mary Sue-ish, her first line sassy and written in incorrect grammar. I'll see where it goes, but for now, it just seems really predictable and simple, not a good combination when talking Re-Animator.

This is so interesting! I hope that you can get the inspiration you need to continue.

hey, uh, dude...

ya need to fix

you might not have not put in to

you might have not put in...

no 'fense or anything.

Lol, that's freaking awesome. Keep it up, I like where this is going!

Excelleent. And I'm not just saying that because I'm your friend.

Okay, this is a great start girl(?)! The only bit I have to pick at i after Kat comes in the room, near the end. It gets kind of confusing, and I think you inadvertently changed the OC's name. Otherwise, I would love to see your next chapter!