yes i love the "Flintilda"

Sorry. I didn't say enough in my last review, so I'm going back to this chapter to review again.

I think the writing style is great, very much like the original book. The whole thing is really sweet. However, the dialogue right before the Chapter Two kiss sounds kind of stilted - maybe you could freshen it up a bit?

I still think it's awesome.

Haha! Awesome!

Wow! This is amazing! I never thought Flinch and Matilda is a possible pairing, but the way you write it, definitely!

It would be great if you could write more about this pairing.

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That was so cute!

I officially support this pairing to death. Frsrs.

This was so freaking... gahh. And everyone was so in character and akjdfgjkrghpsg I need to write something with these two now.

Aww...this was just too awesome! \(-)/ I can't wait to read more stories of yours! I'm serious! Go write a chapter NOW!

Awesomeness,

Lara D

I applaud your creativity in item choices. "Sugar-free gum and a digital camera" nice choice.

now all we need is for Flinch to help Matilda with her asthma.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE IT A 2 SHOT IT WOULD BE SO GREAT!

YEES! thank you thank you thank you! What couple name shold we have for them? Flintilda? Give me some ideas PLEASE! \(-)/ Praise for Flintilda!

Ok...I admit I was a little skeptical about the idea. But it seems to flow pretty well. I think you should continue the story.

Jackson has Mindy

Now Flinch has Matilda

All we need is for Duncan and Ruby to get together and everyone will be all set.