You know, I was rereading this, and I just had to review this chapter because of the note at the top. Umbreons really should be able to learn Bite! It's a Dark-type move, they are Dark-type Pokemon... Not to mention, Eevees can learn Bite! It is so unfair! What were the creators thinking? Lol, I'm done venting now.

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What? The end? NOOOOOOOOOO! I'm going to be so sad about that :'(

It was brilliant though, nonetheless. I was literally holding my breath throughout the battle- it was so intense. I'm so glad Arcane won out and that that horrible girl was dismissed from being champion.

Yay to Kaleb! He'll be a great champion.

As i've always said- fantastic work. I've really enjoyed sharing Sarah's ups and downs and the anticipation of finding out Seth's secret. You did a fantastic job all the way through.

And who knows, maybe we'll join Sarah on her journey through Kanto (please, please, please, please...)

thx i luv it and thx 4 taking the time 2 write it and sticking with the story. well ja ne.

Nooooo you cant just leave off there what happens next!

Ohhh, her. Lol, I should have guessed really, but i'd forgotten all about her :P Grrr, she's such a b****. And annoyingly cocky and smug and all the other nasty personalities anyone could have.

Go Sarah and Arcane!

ARRG

This totally shows how chiks fight harder than guys!

Oh no! Not Wormy! :( Aww, that's so sad :(

Lol, let me guess, Seth?

Awesome chapter, it covered alot of areas.

:S Oh no... Poor, poor Kaleb.

*crosses fingers* He'll be alright though, right?

I don't feel sorry for Seth anymore. Sarah and Kaleb had nothing to do with his past, so why did he act so savagely? And Hayley's right. Revenge is evil. In that case, when killing is involved. But usually, revenge is the best medicine in my case :P

Back to the review though. This chapter was so powerful for something so short. As usual, I loved it. Eventhough it made me sad :(

Me too.

I'm so glad Air's ok :) And the rest of Sarah's team :) That's one relief! But everyone else... My fingers are crossed so tight :) Lol.

Whoa... I'm almost crying now. I probably would be if I wasn't snacking. I like the story. It's somewhat more realistic, if that makes sense.

Oh no. Oh no oh no oh no. Please, please, please let Air be ok.

I had tears in my eyes reading this chapter. It was brilliant. And so sad. Fantastic work :)

Jesus, that's one heck of a chapter!

Poor Bronte :( Lets hope that Kaleb doesn't die too.

I do feel sorry for Seth. It's one hell of an ordeal he's been through, it's no wonder he's so corrupt. But still, there's no need for him to act that extremely. Sarah to the rescue!

I knew it! Oh yes! Score to me :P Lol. :)

Wow... If faced against each other would they really fight each other? :S

Lol, Dragoon. :) You should have called him Dragini, dragon mixed with dratini lol.

On a more serious note- I really hate that Hazel. Seriously, i'm going to storm into your fic and hurt her. *evil glare*