|Reviews for Becoming the Best|
| Guest 7/18/12 . chapter 23
You know, I was rereading this, and I just had to review this chapter because of the note at the top. Umbreons really should be able to learn Bite! It's a Dark-type move, they are Dark-type Pokemon... Not to mention, Eevees can learn Bite! It is so unfair! What were the creators thinking? Lol, I'm done venting now.
| awesomeness-rocks 5/21/11 . chapter 57
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| define-originality 10/10/10 . chapter 57
What? The end? NOOOOOOOOOO! I'm going to be so sad about that :'(
It was brilliant though, nonetheless. I was literally holding my breath throughout the battle- it was so intense. I'm so glad Arcane won out and that that horrible girl was dismissed from being champion.
Yay to Kaleb! He'll be a great champion.
As i've always said- fantastic work. I've really enjoyed sharing Sarah's ups and downs and the anticipation of finding out Seth's secret. You did a fantastic job all the way through.
And who knows, maybe we'll join Sarah on her journey through Kanto (please, please, please, please...)
| Kitsune and Ookami 10/10/10 . chapter 57
thx i luv it and thx 4 taking the time 2 write it and sticking with the story. well ja ne.
| mizuki-hime 10/8/10 . chapter 56
Nooooo you cant just leave off there what happens next!
| define-originality 10/2/10 . chapter 56
Ohhh, her. Lol, I should have guessed really, but i'd forgotten all about her :P Grrr, she's such a b****. And annoyingly cocky and smug and all the other nasty personalities anyone could have.
Go Sarah and Arcane!
| shineon98 9/26/10 . chapter 56
This totally shows how chiks fight harder than guys!
| define-originality 9/11/10 . chapter 55
Oh no! Not Wormy! :( Aww, that's so sad :(
Lol, let me guess, Seth?
Awesome chapter, it covered alot of areas.
| define-originality 9/3/10 . chapter 54
:S Oh no... Poor, poor Kaleb.
*crosses fingers* He'll be alright though, right?
I don't feel sorry for Seth anymore. Sarah and Kaleb had nothing to do with his past, so why did he act so savagely? And Hayley's right. Revenge is evil. In that case, when killing is involved. But usually, revenge is the best medicine in my case :P
Back to the review though. This chapter was so powerful for something so short. As usual, I loved it. Eventhough it made me sad :(
| define-originality 8/30/10 . chapter 53
I'm so glad Air's ok :) And the rest of Sarah's team :) That's one relief! But everyone else... My fingers are crossed so tight :) Lol.
| obsessed-beyond-reason2001 8/29/10 . chapter 52
Whoa... I'm almost crying now. I probably would be if I wasn't snacking. I like the story. It's somewhat more realistic, if that makes sense.
| define-originality 8/29/10 . chapter 52
Oh no. Oh no oh no oh no. Please, please, please let Air be ok.
I had tears in my eyes reading this chapter. It was brilliant. And so sad. Fantastic work :)
| define-originality 8/29/10 . chapter 51
Jesus, that's one heck of a chapter!
Poor Bronte :( Lets hope that Kaleb doesn't die too.
I do feel sorry for Seth. It's one hell of an ordeal he's been through, it's no wonder he's so corrupt. But still, there's no need for him to act that extremely. Sarah to the rescue!
| define-originality 8/28/10 . chapter 50
I knew it! Oh yes! Score to me :P Lol. :)
Wow... If faced against each other would they really fight each other? :S
| define-originality 8/22/10 . chapter 49
Lol, Dragoon. :) You should have called him Dragini, dragon mixed with dratini lol.
On a more serious note- I really hate that Hazel. Seriously, i'm going to storm into your fic and hurt her. *evil glare*