|Reviews for Darkness Rising|
| roxasrules 4/13/10 . chapter 5
*Clap clap clap*
You captured everyone personality's and emotions perfectly!
And this storyline is AWESOME!
This is the MOST original KH fanfic i have EVER read.
I would have reviewed last night but i had to go to sleep and couldn't wait the read the next few chapters.
I LOVE the crossovers, Sonic AND star wars?
| Slicerness 4/12/10 . chapter 5
although the bit with the fairies, i have no idea why everyone calls the 'wingulls' sound like a friggin pokemon to me, anyway, that part was funny. the rest was kind of predictable.
| Slicerness 4/6/10 . chapter 4
oh! THAT shendu. okay i gotcha now. i didn't know who he was before. been years since i seen that show. the shredder seemed kinda... wimpy though, dont'cha think?
| Slicerness 4/3/10 . chapter 3
at first i thought this was the world of 'digital devil saga' but then i remembered there kinda isn't a villain in that world. cuz, ya know, EVERYONE is evil. to an extent anyway.
to tired to think up a witty, or insightful comment. just be lucky this is legible. i've had to go fix over a dozen typo's/ and i barely have two paragraphs!
| Slicerness 3/31/10 . chapter 2
well, you were right. not so much recent as it was... more memorable. is there going to be any anime involved or is this simply american comics/movies?
cuz you could always recruit the (insert name here) necromancer from diablo 2. considering he can be a summoner class i think he'd be perfect for summoning mass amounts of powerful heartless.
| KMSaum 3/29/10 . chapter 1
Also very intriguing, it's kind of fun to think about Skeletor and Maleficent taking on the Restoration Committee and Sora in Radiant Garden.
If I have any advice, it'd be to try to make some of your sentences flow a little more. Make a few of them longer so that things don't seem so choppy.
| Slicerness 3/29/10 . chapter 1
he-man is way the hell before my time. but i AM interested in the story premise. i'm just hopin the next world will be a little more... recent