*Clap clap clap*

Simply amazing!

You captured everyone personality's and emotions perfectly!

And this storyline is AWESOME!

This is the MOST original KH fanfic i have EVER read.

I would have reviewed last night but i had to go to sleep and couldn't wait the read the next few chapters.

I LOVE the crossovers, Sonic AND star wars?

Freakin' awesome.

although the bit with the fairies, i have no idea why everyone calls the 'wingulls' sound like a friggin pokemon to me, anyway, that part was funny. the rest was kind of predictable.

oh! THAT shendu. okay i gotcha now. i didn't know who he was before. been years since i seen that show. the shredder seemed kinda... wimpy though, dont'cha think?

at first i thought this was the world of 'digital devil saga' but then i remembered there kinda isn't a villain in that world. cuz, ya know, EVERYONE is evil. to an extent anyway.

to tired to think up a witty, or insightful comment. just be lucky this is legible. i've had to go fix over a dozen typo's/ and i barely have two paragraphs!

well, you were right. not so much recent as it was... more memorable. is there going to be any anime involved or is this simply american comics/movies?

cuz you could always recruit the (insert name here) necromancer from diablo 2. considering he can be a summoner class i think he'd be perfect for summoning mass amounts of powerful heartless.

Also very intriguing, it's kind of fun to think about Skeletor and Maleficent taking on the Restoration Committee and Sora in Radiant Garden.

If I have any advice, it'd be to try to make some of your sentences flow a little more. Make a few of them longer so that things don't seem so choppy.

Nice job!

-K

he-man is way the hell before my time. but i AM interested in the story premise. i'm just hopin the next world will be a little more... recent