| Reviews for Darkness Rising |
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roxasrules 4/13/10 . chapter 5*Clap clap clap* Simply amazing! You captured everyone personality's and emotions perfectly! And this storyline is AWESOME! This is the MOST original KH fanfic i have EVER read. I would have reviewed last night but i had to go to sleep and couldn't wait the read the next few chapters. I LOVE the crossovers, Sonic AND star wars? Freakin' awesome. |
Slicerness 4/12/10 . chapter 5although the bit with the fairies, i have no idea why everyone calls the 'wingulls' sound like a friggin pokemon to me, anyway, that part was funny. the rest was kind of predictable. |
Slicerness 4/6/10 . chapter 4oh! THAT shendu. okay i gotcha now. i didn't know who he was before. been years since i seen that show. the shredder seemed kinda... wimpy though, dont'cha think? |
Slicerness 4/3/10 . chapter 3at first i thought this was the world of 'digital devil saga' but then i remembered there kinda isn't a villain in that world. cuz, ya know, EVERYONE is evil. to an extent anyway. to tired to think up a witty, or insightful comment. just be lucky this is legible. i've had to go fix over a dozen typo's/ and i barely have two paragraphs! |
Slicerness 3/31/10 . chapter 2well, you were right. not so much recent as it was... more memorable. is there going to be any anime involved or is this simply american comics/movies? cuz you could always recruit the (insert name here) necromancer from diablo 2. considering he can be a summoner class i think he'd be perfect for summoning mass amounts of powerful heartless. |
KMSaum 3/29/10 . chapter 1Also very intriguing, it's kind of fun to think about Skeletor and Maleficent taking on the Restoration Committee and Sora in Radiant Garden. If I have any advice, it'd be to try to make some of your sentences flow a little more. Make a few of them longer so that things don't seem so choppy. Nice job! -K |
Slicerness 3/29/10 . chapter 1he-man is way the hell before my time. but i AM interested in the story premise. i'm just hopin the next world will be a little more... recent |