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TEAM AYUMI 2/9/11 . chapter 12 I would like to see a chibi Heiji and Conan team up... But I would LOVE A CHIBI KAZUCHAN FANFIC AND I WOULD JUST PICK HER UP AND HUG HER SSSSOOOOO KKKKAAAAAWWWWWWIIIIII!_ All right lets see a chibi Kazuha in action and protecting Heiji while he's portecting! Sougi! I would imange what little Kazuchan would like too keep her identy down. She would have her hair down with a hairband(like Ayumichan's twin only with long) or her side bangs tied into braids or barrette holding back her side hair. Anyways a chibi Kazuha would be a whole lot cuter then a chibi Heiji. Although I would like Heiji's heavy, high pitched and childish Osakan accsent, I bet it would sound very ! SO I VOTE FOR CHIBI KAZUCHAN!_ |
Procrastinating Penguin 4/7/10 . chapter 11*glomps Kid!Toichi* You're right. Toichi is way too underrated in the fandom. XD |
Procrastinating Penguin 4/4/10 . chapter 8What? You don't like this chapter? I like it! There's not many Eri fics out there. I think your Eri was very IC ;D, I wrote something similiar a while ago but it was dodgy so I never got around to posting it. (It was Ginzo/Eri, though XD) So very Kogoro and Eri to ignore each other... honestly, I can't wait for them to get back together already! It's so obvious they still like each other. *eye roll* Anyways, I like this chapter. Please keep up the good work. :D |
Procrastinating Penguin 4/3/10 . chapter 1Haha I guess with Kaito, ther are so many things you'd rather not know. XD |
LeonaWriter 4/1/10 . chapter 5Heh, I especially like this one. It's got real potencial. Imagine how many things would've gone differently if Takagi (who MIGHT've listened to Shinichi) had been there right at the beginning. Interesting. |
HetaPastaH3ro 3/31/10 . chapter 4Is Kaito DRUNK? |
roankun 3/31/10 . chapter 33rd chap's not bad. not bad at all. (i didnt read the first two :P) although, you might want to use some spacing. say, two sentences for each paragraph. i dunno why, but for me, it just flows better that way. |
Onomatopoeiafloon 3/30/10 . chapter 3Way to dwell into Haibara's character with such a short amount of words. This was done very well. :3 We actually had to write essay's like this for College Bound English, they're tougher to think of than most people would think. XP Anyways, very cute. I hate how people assume that Haibara is completely cold, in and out, when she clearly isn't. She cares for those kids very much I think, and it's nice to see other people notice her soft and warm interior. :3 |
Onomatopoeiafloon 3/29/10 . chapter 2I love Shinichi so much. :P It would suck to be trying to explain to people something like that and not even realize you'd been turned into a teeny-tiny cute detective twerp. :3 Lawl, and then his fans call him a twerp. XP Anyways, really cute. It's hard writing little things like that. Harder than most people would think. Very cute. :3 |