 AshleyMulder 3/28/10 . chapter 1-(A/N: This is for Ashley, because she gave me the idea. Enjoy!)- Thank you :D And oh, yes, I enjoyed this.
-They lie there, their sparkling cleanness taunting Nessa.- This reminds me of a scene from Sweeney Todd. This is good because I love Sweeney Todd :D
-Nessa presses the knife to the inside of her wrist for a fraction of a second, then cries out and pulls it away. Blood leaks from where the knife had been, but it feels…good, almost. She likes the pain.- Aw, Nessa, no! :( Poor girl. Mentally unstable, that one is...*hugs Nessa*
-Is he a cause of this—this "knife adventure" of Nessa's?- You're the one who drove her over the edge, kiddo! But I love the nickname "knife adventure" :P.
-Once, he calls her "Nessa." It slips out—too much thinking about the old Nessa—and her face lights up. But before he sees her joyful expression, he covers up with "Oh, I'm sorry, Madame Governor," and her face goes back to depressed.- Aw.
I love the ending. Very good in character Bessa :D
Along with the ending I just flat out love this fic. It was great. :D |